If you are interested in some free advice on how to make your lyrics, music, song writing, mixing better, consider visiting one of the links below. They are all free forums where you can post your song and or lyrics and have other songwriters listen and offer their opinion. All you have to do is return the favour. Listen to their songs and offer your opinion.
Friends and family will mostly say nice things about your music and they may or may not know the difference between a good song and a song that has room for improvement. For honest, informed opinions, these forums are the place to go. I’ve spent most of my time at the first link below, but I’ve had songs reviewed at the others as well.
[Black clouds clog the sky]
[Dark clouds roam the sky]
My dark thoughts roam the night
My Demons trying to intercept my life
We’re all livin In life full of lies
yea sea of theifs run the night
The Shadow people tell me they’re nice (yea)
that’s a lie uh uh yea that’s a lie un uh that’s a lie
i know lifes ah lie there’s no reason i should believe a person among the dark hiding in the night livin In the sinners kingdom got learn how to fight gotta fight for what’s right
[Black clouds clog the sky]
[Dark clouds roam the night]
my dark thoughts roam the night behind fear we hide Promise me when I die you won’t cry just Bury me with the roses
“black roses”
so when I sleep
i will sleep tight
Demons running all through out
the night no I know I can’t ran no
I know can’t hide
Black clouds clog the sky
Dark clouds roam the sky
my dark thoughts roam the night But I won’t escape
no i know I can’t hide
Hey Logan,
I think you’ve misunderstood the point of this blog post. If you would like a critique of your song, I’ve provided links to 3 web sites where there are plenty of people waiting to help.
Paul